Well, like I said in my author's note, I also didn't have that much of a problem with the original scene. I can absolutely understand that even John's medically trained eye would have been too blinded by all the emotional turmoil not to notice Sherlock's immediate medical needs. But we probably shouldn't rehash all of that right here, since I feel it's already been discussed ad nauseum.
And thanks for the lovely feedback. That fic was more an exercise in creating alternatives than anything.
Last edited by TeeJay (February 27, 2014 2:19 pm)