Need British beta

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Posted by British obsessor
February 9, 2013 12:19 am
#1

Hi there.
As I am finishing up the last bit on my fanfic I have some questions about British slang. I'm from upstate NY and while I have seen a lot of British television, I am sure I am not using the right slang terms. Is anyone interested in taking a look at my last couple of chapters to see if I got it right?


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Shut up everybody, shut up! Don't move, don't speak, don't breathe, I'm trying to think. Anderson, face the other way, you're putting me off. -Sherlock
 
Posted by AliceI
February 9, 2013 12:23 am
#2

Hello there,
That post was not made by Emily. She must have been using my laptop to visit the site and I didn't realize I was logged in as her.
In any case that request for a beta is from me.
Alice I


"I may be on the side of the angels,
but don't think for one second that I am one of them."
 
Posted by Sherlock Holmes
February 9, 2013 12:49 am
#3

I'd gladly take a look.


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Posted by AliceI
February 9, 2013 4:52 am
#4

Sherlock Holmes wrote:

I'd gladly take a look.

 
Thank you SH. I'll send you a PM? The two chapters are just finished so they are rough drafts. Would you like me to just include the phrases I am unsure of for slang or would you like to see them as a whole?


"I may be on the side of the angels,
but don't think for one second that I am one of them."
 
Posted by Davina
February 9, 2013 11:48 am
#5

I'm happy to proof read as well if you pm the phrases, or the whole thing.

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Posted by AliceI
February 9, 2013 12:42 pm
#6

Davina wrote:

I'm happy to proof read as well if you pm the phrases, or the whole thing.

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Will the PM system handle 4,000 word messages. My chapters for this story are averaging that number of words.

I'm on my way home from work in a moment so I'll send them along later after a nap. (Night shift in the snow Urgh!)

 


"I may be on the side of the angels,
but don't think for one second that I am one of them."
 
Posted by Davina
February 9, 2013 3:48 pm
#7

Maybe the phrases you are unsure about then.


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Don't make people into heroes John. Heroes don't exist and if they did I wouldn't be one of them.
 


 
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