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    December 17, 2012 1:17 am  #1

    KeepersPrice
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    I've written one...

    Well, it took a while but I finally wrote a story and put it out on 'Fanfiction'.  It's a short, light-hearted, somewhat humerous, little Johnlock number.  I owe a lot to Ancientsgate who was my beta reader.  She really challenged me in a few areas and helped me make a number of improvements.  I also want to thank Tobe.  She has been the kindest and most supportive of friends. 

    Just a bit of fun....enjoy.

    http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8802468/1/

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    And I said "dangerous" and here you are.

    You. It's always you. John Watson, you keep me right.

     

    December 17, 2012 2:23 am  #2

    Wholocked
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    Re: I've written one...

    Awww that was so sweet! I love the Ferrari metaphors!

    Great work KP

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    December 17, 2012 7:32 am  #3

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    Re: I've written one...

    Wonderful, KP. Had to laugh out loud at the metaphors. And so romantic  . You must keep writing by all means. 

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    "It is what it is says love." (Erich Fried)

    “Enjoy the journey of life and not just the endgame. I’m also a great believer in treating others as you would like to be treated.” (Benedict Cumberbatch)



     
     

    December 17, 2012 9:33 am  #4

    Harriet
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    Re: I've written one...

    I also had to laugh  Very emotional and Sherlock enigmatic. Nice work!

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    ... but there may be some new players now. It’s okay. The East Wind takes us all in the end.
     

    December 17, 2012 5:39 pm  #5

    tobeornot221b
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    Re: I've written one...

    So sweet, KP!  I have hardly any knowledge of cars but your Ferrari comparison doesn't sound to me like boring technical details. No, not at all! John is such a cutie...
    Looking forward to your next story!
    (Thanks for your kind words - made me blush...)

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    December 17, 2012 11:07 pm  #6

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    Re: I've written one...

    That was nice, KP, funny and romantic. Interesting idea to present it as a play. And with the Ferrari, of course, that was a good comparison.

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    He’s got a dog. We go to the pub on weekends. I’ve met his mum and dad …

    … and his friends and all his family and I’ve no idea why I’m telling you this.
     

    December 19, 2012 1:58 am  #7

    ancientsgate
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    Re: I've written one...

    KeepersPrice wrote:

    Well, it took a while but I finally wrote a story and put it out on 'Fanfiction'.  It's a short, light-hearted, somewhat humerous, little Johnlock number.  I owe a lot to Ancientsgate who was my beta reader.  She really challenged me in a few areas and helped me make a number of improvements.  I also want to thank Tobe.  She has been the kindest and most supportive of friends. 

    Just a bit of fun....enjoy.

    http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8802468/1/

    *loves*  Sorry I was such a PITA at times.  But seriously, congrats on the story. I was very proud of you for finishing, polishing, figuring out how to get it out there. Yay!

     

    December 19, 2012 5:33 am  #8

    Schmiezi
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    Re: I've written one...

    Just lovely! 

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    March 21, 2013 2:50 pm  #9

    Be
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    Re: I've written one...

    I like your story very much. The last two sentences are really beautiful.

     

    March 21, 2013 4:23 pm  #10

    KeepersPrice
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    Re: I've written one...

    Oh thank you, Be!  Glad you liked my little bit of fluff.  :-)

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    And I said "dangerous" and here you are.

    You. It's always you. John Watson, you keep me right.

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    March 21, 2013 4:23 pm  #11

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    Re: I've written one...

    I read it once again today. So lovely. Could they please make a short fillm of this? 

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    "To fake the death of one sibling may be regarded as a misfortune; to fake the death of both looks like carelessness." Oscar Wilde about Mycroft Holmes

    "It is what it is says love." (Erich Fried)

    “Enjoy the journey of life and not just the endgame. I’m also a great believer in treating others as you would like to be treated.” (Benedict Cumberbatch)



     
     

    March 21, 2013 4:58 pm  #12

    crazybbcamerican
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    Re: I've written one...

    Wow.
    I love it!
    " You see it's not enough for me to be a passenger going along for the ride and admiring this Ferrari anymore. What I want…God help me - what I want is to own it. I want it to be mine, so no one else can have it – ever. I want to be able to touch it and run my hands over the sleek design and breathe in the rich smell of leather. I want to take the wheel in my hands and rev the engine to the max and listen to it purr."
    --has to be one of the sexiest things I've *ever* heard a man say (and I've been married 16 yrs!)
    Excellent!

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    August 20, 2013 11:18 pm  #13

    butterfly grl
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    Re: I've written one...

    So well written I watched it rather than reading it.

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    August 21, 2013 2:07 am  #14

    KeepersPrice
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    Re: I've written one...

    Wow!  I didn't realize people were still reading and reviewing this.  Thanks, butterfly and anyone else who said lovely things.  Wish I had time to write more stories but just started an intense new job in June. Maybe one day.....

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    And I said "dangerous" and here you are.

    You. It's always you. John Watson, you keep me right.

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    August 21, 2013 2:20 am  #15

    SilverMoonDragonB
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    Re: I've written one...

    Awwwww that was great!  Really, kudos! 

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    September 2, 2013 6:16 am  #16

    OneMoreMiracle
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    Re: I've written one...

    This was absolutely amazing! I read this so many times over again. You should definitely keep writing more fan fiction!

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