Who is Scarlett?

Gently...Thanks so much! This was just the tonic I needed today, I am sorry I didn't comment sooner.

(or at all on the other fics really, I won't get into it but suffice to say things have been happening with me and my family that has made things...difficult )

Especially for the short notice, this was wonderful. Kudos to you!  A part of me has hoped that if there is a mysterious third Holmes sibling, that it's a sister, so again - thank-you for doing this! 
 

The collection at AO3 is open, btw. I will place a link here later when I can use a computer. Links from my mobile don't work.

Heroes for Another Day

This was a very entertaining story. I loved the detailed description of how Sherlock tried to escape. And I liked how Mrs Hudson ended up being the "conductor of light" to John, figuring it out. And all of them felt very much in character.

Some funny details in this story - the pattern of names for Mycroft's lackeys and the little stab at Moftiss towards the end. Great stuff!

Thank you very much for a very enjoyable read. 

Last edited by Vhanja (December 31, 2016 11:56 am)

Sorry for triple-posting, but let me also give a great thanks to mrshouse for the great fic you wrote for me. I loved it! :D

Blackbeard. Or how Sherlock stole Christmas
Love the little prequel set in Sherlock's past where he gets his heart broken - so sad!
I like the way it skips through the years.
2012 was particularly heartbreaking, but then it got a lot more cheerful and the Johnlocky bit on the final Christmas Eve was perfect.
Loved the idea of John giving him a puppy.

La Vita Nuova
Alcoholic John is pretty heartbreaking to read but also very believable.
Reading this after watching S4 E1 is even more believable and heartbreaking tbh, it fits so well with what actually happened, the beginning part at least!
I really hope the reunion in the actual series happens in a similar way to yours - reuniting for a case.
Your portrayal of John's anger and how he's directing it away from himself is so accurate it's scary! Are you secretly Steven Moffat?
John changed Sherlock's pants in his sleep!!
I genuinely thought Sherlock was faking sickness at first.
Chapter 5 made me cry.
The ending was perfect and I'd like to read more explicit versions on AO3 please.

Heroes For Another Day
Your characterisations were spot on!
I love the idea of John being covered in sick after a day at the surgery, and Sherlock using ridiculously expensive shampoo (and probably a ridiculously expensive conditioner to match!)
Beehives!
I laughed at the idea that the criminals had read Sherlock's studies in rope and wood, and therefore knew how best to secure him.
"...boltholes sounded suspiciously like the ploy a third-rate spy novel author would fall back on to sustain a cock-and-bull plot." Do I sense a jibe at S3? Hope so!
I like the way Mrs Hudson became involved as John's "assistant" briefly, with John taking the lead role as detective.
John's bad ass ordering around of Mycroft's men at the sewers.
Your reference to Moffat & Gatiss at the end was most amusing!

Who Is Scarlett?
Sherlock is written so accurately here, I love it.
And yayyy the kiss with the smashed egg was great
I liked the twist of "the other one" being a sister. Everyone always assumes there's a third Holmes brother but a sister would be great.
I know it's only a short fic but I like it and think it could be developed.
 

Sherlock Holmes wrote:

The Wealthy Bachelor
This was the one written for me. Sorry for giving you such an awkward prompt, lol. First of all, I really like the title. It's very BBC Sherlock in that it's taken from a canon title but adapted/altered.
John in 'soldier mode' - oh yes!
I like the way things build up slowly, with hints of the different cases.
Good job at modernising the adaptation! I like all the little details that remind me of the canon case.
Nice hints of Johnlock with Sherlock not wanting to remember John's wedding day. And the description of John watching him play the violin was just beautiful.
When John steals the baby is brilliant and his tearful reunion with Sherlock at Baker Street the perfect heartwarming ending that left me with tears in my eyes too! I'd be happy if this happened in the show tbh.
Well done and thank you.

You're welcome, Sherlock Holmes! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story I wrote for you.  And don't worry, your prompt was not awkward at all, it just seemed difficult at first, but after some thinking I knew what I could do and I'm glad you liked the result.

Last edited by Yitzock (January 4, 2017 3:10 pm)

Here it is 

Everglow: http://archiveofourown.org/works/9206339/chapters/20884343

I managed to read 11 chapters of "Everglow" thus far and I´m absolutely loving it!

I never predicted that twist concerning dying Sherlock locked in his mind. I thought that he will be revealed as a ghost or John´s hallucination. Kudos for writing that in such a surprising manner - when John woke in that bed bound to Sherlock, he was like "WTF" and so was I!

I adore that filosophy of Coniuncti Sumus!

The idea that John would enter Sherlock´s Mind Palace to make him snap out of it is ingenious and realised to a masterful level here. I was overwhelmed by your skillful description of John´s penetrating into MP and of various rooms in Sherlock´s MP and could not believe how perfectly you nailed the atmosphere of a lucid dream with constantly changing visions that John and Sherlock must overcome (and which John must use to understand Sherlock better). This must be one of the most fascinating and ambitious piece of fanfiction I have ever encountered. It almost remained me of Dante Alighieri´s "Divine Comedy" and its travel through Hell, Purgatory and Heaven.

I am incredibly thankful to you for dedicating this fic to me. I am looking forward to the last part of your beautiful epic!