Ha, so we're on the same page then: it needs more.

As for chapter 2 of 'Just Say Yes', I'll read it right after I finish Whipped, promise. Or after Sherlock (SiB) is finished (unless I start watching HoB after^^)

Lilythiell wrote:

Chapter XIII of Hindrance is up. While it is not intended as the last chapter, it fits. I would say the fic is complete but I feel like leaving something...incomplete. I'm trying to write another chapter, one that would make it all better but it's so BLOODY hard.
The story only needs a final chapter/epilogue to be really and truly complete although the end of chapter XIII works. Not enough for my taste, but it does.
I will write that final chapter/epilogue later on but I suspect I need to take a break (hopefully only a few days) to be able to overcome that slight...problem.

I apologise to everyone for letting you down on this one even if only temporarily.
There's a good thing to be considered though : I'm now officially back reading fics

I have just read chapter 13 and also feel like there is something missing. Would you like to discuss it via pm?

Thank you very much for your comment - and your lovely comment on my fic as well (just got a note by e-mail). I really loved your comment, and thank you so much for thinking I described it well!

And, yes, as mentioned, I have two more fics in the series coming. Which won't be just "more of the same", there will be progression and more emotional deep-diving into the psyche of the both of them. 

Oooh yes, Vhanja! Can't wait for the new installments!
Thank you again for sharing!

I just updated with chapter 4... 

I needed an excuse to get back into creative writing, so I thought I would try my hand at ficwriting too. My first, in progress: The Cat and the Fox

"John isn't sure how it happens. Is he sleepwalking? Does someone bring him here? Or is this some kind of recurring dream?
The setting is always the same. The people never talk to him. Then one day he meets a fox, and together they begin to unravel the mystery of the Masquerade.
John only hopes the fox is clever enough to free them of the nightmare before they both wind up dead.
Don't eat the cheese."

-Explicit
-AU (Canon divergence/alternate meeting)
-Unwilling drug use
-Memory alteration
-Eventual Johnlock, but may not happen in this story (I have a series planned)
-Unfinished but fully outlined, posting a few times a week
-Two chapters currently up, probably posting Ch3 tomorrow

Would love to get some beta readers, if anyone's interested. Lemme know here or there.

Last edited by GimmeCat (September 6, 2016 8:41 pm)

I just added chapter 7

This Is The Phantom Lady wrote:

So... I went on a writing spree... and here it is. 


'Just Say Yes' chapter one; 

http://archiveofourown.org/works/7753291/chapters/17678932 
Thinking she found her way out of an abusive relation the woman finds herself growing dependent on the man she met at the bar that night...
That man who seems all too perfect.
What she doesn't know is that she is nothing but a case to him.Sherlock Holmes soon finds himself in an emotional dilemma... 

Remember to take my tags as warnings. This is a bit of a dark one; watch out for chapter 6 so far. 

Our wonderful Secret Santa Fic Exchange is still looking for participants. You still have two weeks to enlist. Anybody interested? It's great fun!

I've now made my fic into a series, and part 2 is now up! 

The Power of Surrender

"Months have passed since Sherlock and John's first foray into BDSM, and things have progressed. Sherlock is yet again challenged, as their journey into the depths of intimacy, control and surrender takes another step forward."

I've added more tags to this story, so people can know a bit more what type of fic it is and decide if they want to read it or not. 

This will be a trilogy. The third and last story is already planned out in my head, and will deal with John and how he will deal with the issues of control and intimacy. He is quite different from Sherlock, and has his own demons. 

(And I haven't forgotten about you guys's stories, just working to get my own plot bunnies out of my system before sitting down and reading yours).

 

Last edited by Vhanja (September 27, 2016 8:00 pm)

Thank you! I would love it if you would beta for me. I just didn't want to ask, as I figured it might be hard to find anyone wanting to beta those kind of stories.

And, yeah, I'm aware that there are a few in the first one, and so I worked to improve the second one. Glad it's noticeable, even if there are still some errors.

Edit: I've edited some of the comma errors, I spotted them myself now. Or at least some of them. I really struggle with where to put commas and periods in dialogue!

Last edited by Vhanja (September 28, 2016 7:50 am)