The fic is called "Crossing Bridges", inspired by the canon story "The Problem of Thor Bridge". It's a mixture of Johnlock love story (fluffy, but explicit) and case fic, currently 33,500 words long. It still needs an epilogue, the rest is written. Thanks to Susi and beasley, the language should be mostly mistake-free, but the plot is still bothering me.

What I need now is someone who would take a closer look at the story as a whole and comment on the plot developement, character developement and narration pace.

And to be honest, I need someone who is honest and constructive, but gentle. My writer's ego is much more fragile than it might appear to be.

You might refrain from it if depression is some kind of trigger for you.

I'd be more than happy if someone would volunteer!