BBC Sherlock Fan Forum - Serving Sherlockians since February 2012 / I've written one...

**Posted by KeepersPrice** December 17, 2012 1:17 am

Well, it took a while but I finally wrote a story and put it out on 'Fanfiction'. It's a short, light-hearted, somewhat humerous, little Johnlock number. I owe a lot to Ancientsgate who was my beta reader. She really challenged me in a few areas and helped me make a number of improvements. I also want to thank Tobe. She has been the kindest and most supportive of friends.

Just a bit of fun....enjoy.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8802468/1/

**Posted by Wholocked** December 17, 2012 2:23 am

Awww that was so sweet! I love the Ferrari metaphors!

Great work KP

**Posted by SusiGo** December 17, 2012 7:32 am

Wonderful, KP. Had to laugh out loud at the metaphors. And so romantic . You must keep writing by all means.

**Posted by Harriet** December 17, 2012 9:33 am

I also had to laugh Very emotional and Sherlock enigmatic. Nice work!

**Posted by tobeornot221b** December 17, 2012 5:39 pm

So sweet, KP! I have hardly any knowledge of cars but your Ferrari comparison doesn't sound to me like boring technical details. No, not at all! John is such a cutie...
Looking forward to your next story!
(Thanks for your kind words - made me blush...)

**Posted by QuiteExtraordinary** December 17, 2012 11:07 pm

That was nice, KP, funny and romantic. Interesting idea to present it as a play. And with the Ferrari, of course, that was a good comparison.

**Posted by ancientsgate** December 19, 2012 1:58 am

KeepersPrice wrote:
Well, it took a while but I finally wrote a story and put it out on 'Fanfiction'. It's a short, light-hearted, somewhat humerous, little Johnlock number. I owe a lot to Ancientsgate who was my beta reader. She really challenged me in a few areas and helped me make a number of improvements. I also want to thank Tobe. She has been the kindest and most supportive of friends.

Just a bit of fun....enjoy.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8802468/1/

*loves* Sorry I was such a PITA at times. But seriously, congrats on the story. I was very proud of you for finishing, polishing, figuring out how to get it out there. Yay!

**Posted by Schmiezi** December 19, 2012 5:33 am

Just lovely!

**Posted by Be** March 21, 2013 2:50 pm

I like your story very much. The last two sentences are really beautiful.

**Posted by KeepersPrice** March 21, 2013 4:23 pm

Oh thank you, Be! Glad you liked my little bit of fluff. :-)

**Posted by SusiGo** March 21, 2013 4:23 pm

I read it once again today. So lovely. Could they please make a short fillm of this?

**Posted by crazybbcamerican** March 21, 2013 4:58 pm

Wow.
I love it!
" You see it's not enough for me to be a passenger going along for the ride and admiring this Ferrari anymore. What I want…God help me - what I want is to own it. I want it to be mine, so no one else can have it – ever. I want to be able to touch it and run my hands over the sleek design and breathe in the rich smell of leather. I want to take the wheel in my hands and rev the engine to the max and listen to it purr."
--has to be one of the sexiest things I've *ever* heard a man say (and I've been married 16 yrs!)
Excellent!

**Posted by butterfly grl** August 20, 2013 11:18 pm

So well written I watched it rather than reading it.

**Posted by KeepersPrice** August 21, 2013 2:07 am

Wow! I didn't realize people were still reading and reviewing this. Thanks, butterfly and anyone else who said lovely things. Wish I had time to write more stories but just started an intense new job in June. Maybe one day.....

**Posted by SilverMoonDragonB** August 21, 2013 2:20 am

Awwwww that was great! Really, kudos!

**Posted by OneMoreMiracle** September 2, 2013 6:16 am

This was absolutely amazing! I read this so many times over again. You should definitely keep writing more fan fiction!