Hi guys,

As part of a project for college I have written a piece of pastiche work, called "A Lethal Orchestration" (not a very canonical title I know, but it was the only thing that worked) and I was wondering if you guys could please read it and comment on it/give me feedback. I need some reader responses as part of my project and I didn't want to ask the people at my college because barely anyone has read any of the stories. I'll obviously anonymise the responses when talking about it at my college. 

I'd really appreciate it if you could read it through and let me know what you think, like or dislike or if there are any improvements you can think of. Comment on here or comment anonymously on AO3, it's up to you. 

Thank you so much, here is a link to my work on AO3: http://archiveofourown.org/works/1146629