Howdy,

New to the fandom, but I have a fanfic history elsewhere.  Couldn't stop myself from writing a post-RF fic from John's POV.  (I know, it's not like it hasn't been done.  But can you ever get enough?)

I don't want to be embarrassingly American, and would love to have some British fans read the fic over before it goes to the Internet.  Check for glaring Britpick problems, but also for more subtle things like language use and word choice.  Anyone willing to offer the favor, in exchange for about 1500 words of angst and the possibility of a joyful reunion?  Maybe you'll cry.

This is G-rated but it can be Johnlock, if your mind wants it to be.

Here I am a good American trying to do what's right for the fandom by firmly editing myself.  Can you help a sister out?

Here's a link to the Fanfiction.net posting. 

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8861448/1/Half-Life

Many thanks in advance.

Fillyjonk

Last edited by Fillyjonk (January 1, 2013 9:32 pm)