I just started watching episodes 11 days ago, and have gone over the top into the fandom vortex here.  What an amazing show.  Reichenbach Fall might be my favorite television viewing, ever.  The acting and music are absolutely sublime.  And it only took a few hours for me to go from "That lead actor is bit strange-looking" to "Oh, my, he's simply, simply beautiful!" 

Any adult British fans out there who love fanfic care to Britpick a post-RF story that flowed out of me this week?

Here's some incentive: it's a sad, sad story but holds out hope for a happy ending.  Told from John's POV, so angst abounds.  You might cry.  Teaser snippet:

Eight weeks and he has not yet ticked off the half-life of violent memory. He has not gone one hour waking without the loop: the black shape falling you and the roaring in his ears and the metal smell of blood yours on red pavement.

In every shop the papers sell your eyes your coat collar your hair


I'm looking for an adult reader, someone who can not only point out things like "crisps" instead of "chips," but also pick up on flow and more subtle language differences between the US and Britain.  (There's a certain tone - a formality - to language on the show and in educated British adult speak that goes beyond vocabulary and slang.  There are speech patterns and word orders and obscure things like that.)

I'm a fairly experienced writer and vicious self-editor, so never fear.  You don't have to critique the characterization, pace, etc. (though you'd certainly be welcome to).  I really just want someone to catch me if I'm making silly American errors in usage.  And, hey, you can read a sad-John story while you're waiting for new episodes.

Thanks in advance if anyone is willing to take this on.  You can contact me at fillyjonk at verizon dot net.

Fillyjonk